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Reviews for King of Hearts

By : charlemagne4ever
  • From ANON - pixiecorn on January 22, 2005
    oh thats so sad i was almost crying when he said freds name stupid ass and then buffy is leaving you are so mean

    and i love this story it is sooooooooooooo kool

    i hope you update really really asap soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

    i wanna know what happens next
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  • From ANON - Kayla on January 22, 2005
    Omg so good but please no more fred and spike it breaks my heart everytime i have to read it i suggest you make buffy pregent and try and get them together. get rid of dru and make her lose the baby or something just put spike and buffy together!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 22, 2005
    I'm glad to see updates of this story again. And I'd love to read more.
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  • From ANON - Kimber on January 22, 2005
    Oh poor Wesley, my heart goes out to him.....to love so much that much and be rejected for society's sake and that another man will raise your child......and Poor Buffy, so have found a love so strong it ripes your heart to shreds.

    Buffy's stunt reminds me of protocal and the one movie with Sondra Bullock, Miss Congentiality......both movies I adore......

    I can't wait to read the next chapter you do leaving us with cliffhangers and angsty parts so well........


    Kimber
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  • From ANON - kiss_me on January 02, 2005
    oooh! more? buffy & spike soon again please? :'( cya x
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  • From ANON - Kimber on January 02, 2005
    Oh, who could it be....my vote goes to....Giles,,,,,,,nay, just joking...hmmmm I say Snyder.....nah to weasely, but not off my list yet......I know, it's the prince he replaced, the one that got over looked, hmmmmm. Oh I guess I willl have to wait, hope it won't be for too much longer.....since the count down is with 2 more chapters....


    Man I was so sure you were going to get Buffy shot.....I hope you fix Spike soon, he's getting to much like one of the uppity class, going to marry for the wrong reasons, lying to his people like that, LOL, just like a politician, sneaky bastards that they are....LOL.
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  • From ANON - kiss_me on December 29, 2004
    he cut the strap!? rude much? and rupert is lying to buffy and spike leave them b damn it! glad ur continuing.. cya x Aisling x
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  • From ANON - Kimber on December 26, 2004
    Charlie

    So happy you came back with an update. Have to say I would have loved a happier chapter, but then where would the story be.....

    Poor Buffy, to be betrayed by her father and her lover so.....Rupert to betray his honor to not do what is best for the crown. Fred's child would be heir, and no longer would the royal blood line be so. For Rupert not to have called Dru on the DNA and using it for his own personal gains means he was a traitor to his duty toward the King, some could and would say was a act of Treason.

    I hope you have more soon, cause I want to find out who is trying to kill Spike....

    Kimber
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  • From charlemagne4ever on August 22, 2004
    PJ: Thanks for the hint about the church. I'm not too familiar with the Church of England, however, I did attend an Anglican service or two while I was there (I'm Protestant, but a totally different branch which didn't exist where I was). I found the Church of England rites and mass very similar to Catholic ones, so I just assumed they had confession as well. I guess it shows that no matter how much research you do, there's always room for improvement.
    The Tower scene: I agree with you that I should have added "Humil" to the description in the archive, the problem is that in the beginning I intended to write a comedy, and the rest "just happened". I haven't found any way to modify the categories at AFF later, perhaps there is a hidden function I haven't figured out? If so, please let me know. Yet I think reading habits are a good indication for what someone is writing - those of you who read profiles have a fairly good idea of where my limits and taboos are by the "recommended reading" section of my profile.

    THANKS FOR REVIEWING, EVERYONE, IT IS MUCH APPRECIATED!!!

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  • From charlemagne4ever on August 22, 2004
    Kimber: as you said yourself, when it comes to Dru, Spike is partial, also in my alternate universe. The way e hie him, he would not doubt he is the child's father if Dru says so because she is his first big love. As for Sir Rupert, of course he could suggest DNA testing, but I totally disagree that he would ever say so BECAUSE HE WANTS SPIKE TO STAY THE HELL AWAY FROM HIS DAUGHTER! For Sir Rupert, the scandal is a blessing because it keeps Spike away from Buffy entirely.
    And, no, not everyone knows how old Spike is - they never announced in public there was a baby switch, they always claimed Spike had studied abroad and therefore never been present.
    About the security in Buckingham Palace, well, I don't know where you live, but have you heard about the guy in the Bin Laden costume getting access to a private party hosted by the Queen for her family last year? He walked past security, and no one even bothered to ask for an invitation. You'd be amazed how far a self-assured behaviour can get you!
    As for the "Buffy gets pregnant and he's married to Fred" part: I don't think I'd have 3000 hits for this story if I intended to go for the obvious stereotype.
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  • From ANON - PJ on August 16, 2004
    Hmm. Darker and more serious than I thought it would be, I there would be more humour less seriousness ie homeless issues. Not that this is a bad ting at all.
    You have clearly done your research which is great, I really dislike reading a story and coming across a glaring error. I think you write really well and I liked the meeting between Buffy and Spike.
    However I REALLY disliked the tower scene. I cant believe that Spike would be THAT callous. I think it was funny at first but it was taken too far, I felt like it was mental torture bordering on abuse. Buffy was really convinced she was going to die, was terrified and sobbing. Then to be touched sexually at that point and then humiliated by being made to wash the floor. Im sure u intended it to be funny i.e. spike getting his own back for the viagra (which was v.funny btw) but having worked in job dealing with victims of abuse this felt a little close to home. Sorry for the rant but its something that I feel quite strongly about.
    Other than that one chapter I really do like the story, the Jack the ripper scene was great and spike would definately make a better monarch than any one of our royal family. Cant wait to see how the thing with Dru and Fred plays out.
    PS. In the first chapter you have the queen say to the archbishop "forgive me father as I have sinned", the queen is a protestant so wouldnt refer to him as 'father' and say this as it is wis sis said by catholics only at confession.



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  • From ANON - Kimber on August 15, 2004
    Hmmm

    Ever hear of DNA.....that baby Dru is carrying could be anyone's....Rupert and Spike are smart enough to tell her they will do nothing until the baby is born and proved by medical means that the baby is Spike's......That would have been the first thing Rupert would have said......and Spike needs to wake up and stop defending the, yes I'm going to say it, THE WHORE.

    What is going to happen when Buffy ends up being the only one pregnant with Spike's child and he is already married to Fred.

    Also everyone knows how old Spike is.....he was born the same day the young Prince was that is a given if indeed they were swid atd at birth.......

    And Dru never would have made it on stage.....the hood would have been pulled back and inspected before she was allowed on stage her face would have been bare for the people too see, and security would have not allowed a unknown hooded person that close to the King.......

    hmmmm, things that make you go hmmmmmm

    Kimber
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 29, 2004
    more please
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  • From ANON - Azrielle6969 on June 28, 2004
    NO! It can't be his....I'm begging here...
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  • From ANON - Heral on June 06, 2004
    I'm not quite sure I like your incarnation of Buffy, she is irritating and smug, smug people grrrr I have no time for them.
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