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Reviews for Unexpected Arrival

By : neen
  • From ANON - cantic on July 21, 2013
    Interesting story. Some parts need more explanation about Midian and some characters there. Also, it was a tough read in the sense that you kept saying it was a Spuffy fic and it only started being Spuffy at around ch. 21 - out of 23 chapters. That's not what I call a Spuffy fic. But again, interesting idea.
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  • From Alwaysjbj on July 22, 2005
    Bloody brilliant fic!!! I am loving this... all of it... I adore Samuel and hope to be seeing more of him in the future. This is a truly awesome fic! Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Margaret Longstreth on May 08, 2005
    I really enjoyed what I could find of this AU story. However, for me it seems that some chapters have disappeared; i.e. 18. Chapter 19 is only a few paragraphs. I am hoping you haven't stopped writing because I want to see more.
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  • From ANON - redwulf50 on April 27, 2005
    I have one question for the so called reviewers here have any of you stupid bitches ever watched season 6 and 7 Btvs. Buffy was a complete bitch, and whored herself out as much as opossible. Spike was trustworty enough to sleep next too, but not for her precious scoobs to knopw about, Xander who tried to rape Buffy in the Pack, and Willow who mind raped Tara, but like Buffy they get a get out of jail free card, so why don't you go puke this shit you are talking up in a corner and chew over it quietly, or at least have the balls to post your email addy so the writer can contact you with thier views and oh yeah TTTowerself get over yourself, you are obviously a Bangel fan so bugger the hell off
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  • From ANON - txjmfan on February 14, 2005
    Love this chapter, especially the way the fairy tale-like ending is a stark contrast to the scene with Xander, Willow & Tara. The love scene was beautiful. Look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - becky on January 02, 2005
    now fast forward to spuffy please we have waited a long time!:)
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  • From ANON - txjmfan on December 31, 2004
    Absolutely beautiful chapter. Sad that Rebecca is gone, but glad that the baby is okay and that Spike has Buffy and Dawn with him. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - becky on November 06, 2004
    i just read all 20 chapters and i must say this story is wonderful! thanks for the extra surprise with the ghosts please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kimber on November 04, 2004
    Okay

    So you think Spike after he figures out that she had to die for Buffy to live will be able to look at Buffy let alone love her to pieces. Buffy will always think that he's with her because of the connection she has with Rebecca. Then the baby is going to grow up and find all this out and hate Buffy for being alive at the cost of her/or his mothers death. Xander was right...this is just not right. We have 20 chapters of having to deal with Rebecca and still will in memory or spirit as well. I find it hard that you will get Spuffy out of this for she will still be here since now we have to deal with Spike's grieving and Buffy feeling guilty and everyone feeling sorry for the now motherless baby who's mother was beyond selfish knowing what was going to happen and still played with peoples emotions and hearts. You will not have to worry, my curiosty has been dealt with enough now to know this story line is no longer for me......I really had hoped you would make this work. But I really don't see how or way Spike would want Buffy any where near him or his child if it survives....for she is the reason Rebecca is dead in his eyes. For her not to tell him she must have known or thought he would have killed Buffy for her to survive. Spike is never one to think before he speaks. I'm sure Xander will not keep his mouth shut and Spike will find out what Rebecca told him that will even piss him off more......
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  • From ANON - feistypumpkin on November 04, 2004
    MOre more more more moremore!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Blazing Fire on November 04, 2004
    Oh, my, God. Rebecca is dead, Joyce and Anne there to deliver the baby. Wow... that's all I can say. Definately can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - ttowerself on June 03, 2004
    DO NOT TELL ME YOU WENT THERE.

    Rebecca is now repregnanted with her and Williams baby.....SO NOT RIGHT!!!!!!!!

    Listen, let me explain Spuffy for you in my opinion....It means Spike's main focus in the story is BUFFY.....NOT no Mary Sue.......HE claims Buffy, NOT a Mary SUE.....he impregnants BUFFY....not some damn MARY SUE!!!!!!!

    PLEASE REMOVE THIS FROM THE SPUFFY DIRECTORY AND PLACE IT WHERE IT BELONGS.....IN THE GENERAL SECTION WHERE THE ONES THAT LIKE MAJOR SPIKE AND MARYSUE CAN ENJOY IT........

    If you do spuffy this what the hell have you left for Spuffy to enjoy together.....NOT A DAMN THING....cause good ole Rebecca has been there and done that now.....BULL SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She is supposed to kiss Rebecca's feet and say, "Oh thank you, because of you I can have my vampire lover and his child to raise....oh thank you ole great ancestor you.....if it wasn't for you I don't know what I would have done."

    That is when old Spike is done grieving over his dead or disappeared first CLAIMED wife. Hell Rebecca not only get to be is first human wife, but his first true vampire mate as well.......GET REAL!

    Or better yet, if the child is not born or whatever....there is something more for Spike to wallow in grief over....

    I can't remember if this is you first story or not....I think it is.....Do you outline before you start and finish your plot, or do you just write for the moment.....casue I'm getting the impression you write for the moment and do not think ahead of where your are REALLY going with a story.....too many stories in the story that is confusing and bogging down whatever it is you are trying to say.....lost me with the Giles, Katherine and who Samuel really is....again, too much bogginess here.

    Sorry, just not buying you eventual Spuffiness here.....or at least a realistic one.


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  • From ANON - Burnz on June 03, 2004
    Sorry sweetie. I am going to have to bail on this. The baby thing, especially with R. carrying it, is just to much for this mule to pull. Even if for some strange reason you had Spike confess his undying love to Buffy; have them do the horizontal mambo on the floor right at this second; follow that by a quickie divorce from R. and a vegas wedding there is just no way this could be Spuffy. Again, I think you would do well to put this on a general Buffy instead of Buffy/William-Spike. Just to avoid getting flamed. Good luck with it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 03, 2004
    More please. I don't know what Samuel should be though...
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  • From ANON - Angi on June 03, 2004
    I?m holding you to your word, because the last development was SO not needed. Sorry, but the only one I want to see knocked up by Spike is Buffy. Well, gotta keep the faith, huh?
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