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Reviews for Unexpected Arrival

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  • From ANON - bansheeh on May 17, 2004
    buffys gonna play second fiddle
    to a lady spikes put a ring on?

    again?



    i hope u wont make buffy look like 2nd best or
    th consolation prize...
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  • From ANON - caroline on May 16, 2004
    ok, i'm not saying this isn't a good fic.....it's just that it's not SPUFFY and that reallllllllllllllllly pisses me off. but it's good, though!
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  • From ANON - supernova on May 15, 2004
    I love this story, but I can't wait for Buffy and Spike to reunite I'm a major Spuffy fan.
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  • From ANON - shippy on May 14, 2004
    Why did you register this fic under Spuffy, this is offensive to genuine Spuffy readers? Nlf-rlf-respecting Spuffer can stand reading this and not be hurt. I hate Spike/Mary Sues as it's so easy to provide the girl with all virtues. Buffy has issues yes but so does Spike, he is no angel. I'd really like for you to remove this fic from the Buffy Spike section.
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  • From ANON - ReneesFic on May 14, 2004
    Rebecca sounds like a Mary Sue character. She's too perfect. She has all this knowledge about demons, she makes Spike happy, and everyone thinks she's just great. I know Buffy did some bad things to Spike in season six, but Spike wasn't completely innocent, either. Does Rebecca know that Spike killed two slayers? Did Spike tell her that he told Buffy that she belonged in the dark with him? Are Spike and Buffy only going to get together in the last chapter (after, I assume, Rebecca dies)?
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  • From ANON - jennybear on May 14, 2004
    Okay. I was enjoying your story a lot at first. Nice interestinot. ot. Your writing is very good. But, I've read the 14 chapters on fanfiction.net and I'm not feeling any better about Spike and Buffy getting together. Buffy is not the type of chic to just turn over her man to another woman and wait it out. At least not the Buffy I know. I liked her telling everybody about her and Spike. But, now what can realistically happen. I don't think I even want them together anymore in this story. There are huge differences her Becca's William and Buffy's Spike. He is not the same man. Buffy waited too long, yeah. That's absolutely true. Spike moved on with his first love. At this point, Buffy and Spike are both acting out of character. I'm not flaming, I really am not. Your story kept me reading and I love your details. I just don't know where you go from here, and to me, it just wouldn't make sense for Spike and Buffy to end up together. He is in love with a relative of hers who has a piece of her inside. I want to Buffy to move on now, too. She deserves to be happy every bit as much as he does. It would make more sense for Spike and Rebecc get get sucked into the past to live out the rest of their lives. JMO.
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  • From ANON - Kimber on May 14, 2004
    Banshee

    Trust me....it don't get any better in the spuffy loving.....pop over to fanfiction.net....it's up to chapter 14 there and ALOT of Specca.....DEEP Spbecca..................with promises of spuffiness to come.......That is if people wish to catch up on this story quicker.......I agree that she has written herself into a corner and will be interesting if majority of the women believing this one. Cause I know I wouldn't take him back.....would move on and bake like a cookie and not let him taste the finished product......just let him remember when I was cookie dough.


    Kimber
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  • From ANON - bansheeh on May 14, 2004
    oh and ud better have a damned good reason for buffy agreeing to go with spike in the end,
    after hes told her he loved rebecka more...

    and i dont think buffy could ever really trust herself her feelings and her heart with him
    if she ever thought spike still loved rebecka even a little in THAT' way..in the end of this drama
    when hes gonna want her back ...

    this is gonna take some serious genious..to make this believable... that buffy'd ever agree to
    play second best, is hilarious... and as a woman it rubs me the wrong way...

    shed never give him her all , if he didnt completly give her his all...
    *no shifty oh i love rebecka but i love you too.. or..i love rebecka but i love u 4% more so i pick you....
    he has to fall out of love' with becka'....*

    of course this is only suggestions... ;)



    Love ya story..

    ..b ..bansheeh...
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  • From ANON - bansheeh on May 14, 2004
    Im sorry but how in the hell will u redeem spike from that licking thing with rebecka?


    i hope u know what ure doing... cose i mean this will take some serious SERIOUS
    spike groweling and making up to buffy for this...

    If im to be honest im not sure it can be done...

    andhe she sleeps with rebecka, you cant possibly think u could redeem spike in our eyes in this fic , again...
    less along in buffys eyes...

    no selfrespecting female would take that..
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  • From ANON - Darnota on May 13, 2004
    More please. I'm very curious to see how things work out between Buffy, Spike, and Rebecca. I like it that you aren't rushing it all, it wouldn't make much sense if Spike didn't feel anything for Rebecca.
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  • From ANON - Karen on May 13, 2004
    Wonderful story. I just want to cry for Buffy!
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  • From ANON - Lorraine on May 13, 2004
    Creative idea. I'd love to read more.
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  • From ANON - Tigger on May 13, 2004
    Okay I thought this was going to be a B/S fic. I don't think I like it that much unless your going for a dramatic get back together secen! Then YAY!!
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  • From ANON - Draconiansrock on May 13, 2004
    WOW! That was an amazing update! I love how u put Buffy's self-realization in there that she needed Spike more than she knew. Also good to know that Spike had it in him to stand up to Buffy even with her hands down his pants :). Plz continue as soon as possible!
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  • From ANON - Kimber on May 13, 2004
    For those who wish to read ahead....she has more chapters over on fanfiction.net....I think it's up to chapter 13 or so there.....could be she is goto ato add more smutty goodness since she has brought it over to the adult one.......


    Kimber
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