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Reviews for Keeping it in the Family

By : Audrina56
  • From ANON - Bugg on March 31, 2004
    NO, no more please more, make it better, this is such a good story but please more, *whimper* please
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  • From ANON - AnneLiz on March 31, 2004
    Oh no, please, you can't end it this way!
    I want more!!! I wanna see them make up... I wanna see Buffy send Angel to hell (figuratively speaking).. and I want an happy ending!!!
    Write the sequel, please!! :)
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  • From ANON - Cordelia Chase on March 31, 2004
    Is that it? Where's the rest?? You can't just leave me hanging like that!!!!!!! Please continue this.
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  • From ANON - messy on March 30, 2004
    hey, don't you dare living it with nquelquel...I mean, pretty please?!!? :-(
    I would love to see maybe Buffy pregnant and the baby having big blue eyes ;-)
    I'll look forward to a sequel :P
    Love,
    messy
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  • From ANON - moi on March 30, 2004

    I WANT A SEQUEL AND A HAPPY ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    COME ON, PRETTY PLEASE? I NEED IT !!!!!

    I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVER


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  • From ANON - MaryAnn on March 30, 2004
    I loved this story. I really hope you do a sequel. maybe with a happier ending. Or at least let us see angel get what's coming to him.(bad things) Losing his wife to his little brother. I only have one suggestion and please don't take it as a flame. the grammar and spelling was really bad. maybe have a beta reader check it before post it. keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - shelly on March 29, 2004
    All I have to say is there better be a sequal with an ending like that!!!!!! I'm dying to know what happens next! :o)
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  • From ANON - Renee\' on March 29, 2004
    I really like what you've got going here, but it would be so much better if you spell checked it. Not the computer type of spell check, but the read-thru type. The computer automatically corrects some things, and it made your story seem a little wonky in some places. If you went back thru it, your story would be great.
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  • From ANON - Cin on March 29, 2004
    your story idea is a good one, but you need a beta. you need to proof read your material before posting. there were numerious errors in both grammer & spelling. there are many people out there willing to beta stories. i suggest that you find one before post a sequel or another chapter. don't give up. writing takes practice to get it just right. i took me a while before i got the hang of it. your storyline has plenty of room to grow into a very steamy story.
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  • From ANON - albie on March 29, 2004
    Interesting premise for a story adn I think a sequel would work well. My advice before you write that? Get a beta, someone to look over your work and help you out with spelling, grammar, and consistency. And also, please work on characterization, especially in dialogue. Especially in Spike's dialogue.
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  • From ANON - Lucidity on March 29, 2004
    I think you should very much continue with this story!! Please!?!
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  • From ANON - catie_cat on March 29, 2004
    Great story!!!!! Please continue....
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  • From ANON - LottieluvsSpuffy on March 29, 2004
    Please make a sequal I relly liked that, it was good
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  • From ANON - October on March 29, 2004
    Holy crap! That was sooooooooooo mean! I love the angst too, but happy ending, happy happy ending!

    Please write a sequel to this, I would like to see how this ends.
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