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Reviews for The Silent Urge Series

By : Druffine
  • From ANON - Mandylynn on April 04, 2004
    *pounce* Yes! I want more! Please? I want to see how Spike handles Treckle and Xander and the bar and...oh my gosh! I want more! :D
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  • From ANON - Lyid on April 04, 2004
    Wow, awesome! I loved this so far, you have to write more! Treckle is awesome! If you want me to, I could go through the previous chapters with a spell checker and fix some of the grammer. I'm not an expert with spelling and stuff, but I could help out som.........
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  • From ANON - kyrieane on April 04, 2004
    you the man!!! you the bomb baby! xander realizing just what its like for spike, to always be on the outside looking in? brilliant! more soon? greedy little gus, aint i?

    kyri
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  • From Kristin on April 03, 2004
    I like this! I am interested to see what Trekle is trying to do with Xander, though. Give us more, please!
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  • From ANON - kyrieane on April 03, 2004
    do i hafta say it? bloody gorgeous! my poor spikey! torturing the poor vamp like that! im gonna like seeing treckle get his in the end!!!!

    smoochiabe
    abe

    kyri
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  • From ANON - mel on April 03, 2004
    I'm loving this story. Any story that is Spike/Xander with Spike taking Xander away from the pain of his home life (that his 'so called friends' never seem to notice) is a GOOD thing. Please keep going with this fic and let them get together soon. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK :o)
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  • From ANON - Lostgirl on April 03, 2004
    *whimper* Need more! Need more NOW! :-) I love the way you manage to convey the *longing*! Wow! More PLEASE!!
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  • From ANON - Mandylynn on April 03, 2004
    Must...have...more! *Ch. 7* I'm liking this building up stuff...and I need more! :D


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  • From ANON - kyrieane on April 02, 2004
    wow! and again wowlovelove this chapter! keep it up....love the snarky spike, with just a hint of sweet!!!

    smoochies

    kyri
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  • From ANON - Cathy on April 02, 2004
    I am really liking this story. It is so interesting, especially the interaction and the tentative feelings that are growing between Xander and Spike. Definitely want to read more.

    And don't worry so about your English skills. You are doing great, actually. There might be a grammar error every now and then, but so what? Other authors whose first language is English also make mistakes like that. We, the fic readers of the world, take it all in our stride, and just enjoy the story.ThanThank you for a wonderful story. I am looking forward to the next chapter. And the ones after that, too. Please keep writing, and don't worry about any mistakes with the English language. It's not known for being an easy language to learn, even for us whose first language is English. I know that I would never be able to write in German! LOL.

    Cathy in Australia
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  • From ANON - MsSpikester on April 01, 2004
    Don't apologize for your writing, I love the quality of the story....we are seeing what is going on in their minds - the sporadic rough cut thinking is exactly what goes on in my mind....Most people's minds bounce around while they are processing wha goi going on in front of them....I think it is beautifully written. Don't read alot of m/m, but I check the section e day day since I started reading your story, so you have me hooked...Well done!
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  • From ANON - gact on March 31, 2004
    You're from Germany that's so cool. I'm taking German right now at school, it's tough.
    So anyway, I love you're story, especially how you switch back and forth between the two point of views. You're writing is excellent, I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - kyrieane on March 31, 2004
    i swear to God you were a roller coaster engineer in a previous life! sweet and sappy and heartwrenching! and not nearly long enough! and im sniffin here!
    ta sweets....

    kyri
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  • From ANON - Lostgirl on March 31, 2004
    MORE PLEASE!! You don't wanna see me beg do ya? Cause I will! I just found this yesterday and when I saw it wasn't finished I whimpered and now there's more today and . . . . okay, calming myself, but still, MORE PLEASE!

    (And, seriously, I wouldn't have known English wasn't your first language either, if you hadn't commented. You're doing wonderfully. You're going at a good pace without making it hurried and your characters are *so* good!)
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  • From ANON - Dee on March 30, 2004
    You have some really fine story-telling going on. And no, I did not realize that English is not your native language until I noticed it in your Author's Note. I have seen plenty worse from American writers. Your use is really pretty good, but sometimes the spelling slips.
    I am glad you mentioned it, though, because now I am not distracted by deploring the state of our educational system, as I do when the same mistakes are made by someone who has every reason to know better.
    Where do you live? If this is an example of a second language, you would put most of us to shame wiht your native tongue, I'll bet! Please keep up the good work. I am truly enjoying your tale. My only complaint is having to wait for the next installment.

    --Dee
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