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Reviews for Surprised Innocence

By : BeautifulSinnocence
  • From ANON - Mise on June 16, 2014
    I am really enjoying this story. I ship Spuffy for grownup Buffy, but teenage Buffy is totally Angel's girl. This is a scene that I would think would be done in Bangel circles as much as the "missing scene" from Smashed is done by Spuffy shippers, but this is the first one I've actually come across.

    So, I'm not a native speaker, but I lived in the Gaelteacht in Connemara (the same place Liam was from before he met Darla!) for a while, and I have a good bit of Irish. If you're a native speaker, tá brón orm agus totally ignore me! I've never heard the word "lonin," and it's not in my Irish dictionary or Google translate. When I was reading the story, I did read the word in my head as if it had an accent on both of the vowels. "Lónín" would mean "little lunch." "Stórín" means what you described, though. Totally sorry if I'm just an idiot and haven't heard the word. I do love this story, it just occurred to me as I read that Angel seemed to be using the diminutive of "lunch" as a sexy pet name for Buffy. Which is kinda kinky considering he's a vamp.
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  • From ANON - Sarah Aless on March 06, 2004
    I'd love to see more of this :D us) us) fics are great when done well. He such an exquisite tormentor in the hands of the right authors. I really enjoyed this part and really hope you continue.
    Sarah
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  • From RipeWickedPlum00 on March 06, 2004
    wow... that was really good...
    usually i run screaming from anything that indicates buffy/angel fics... but i wared red and decided to read this...
    its really good... really... yeh...continue it please...
    heh heh heh... maybe he sends her into the arms of spike
    nah...im kidding...its overdone... maybe she comes back to angelus and explores the darker side of sex with him, ya know, he introduces her to that world...you could do that and it would be good
    i guess angelus would be a good fuck...
    until he kills you at leas
    kee
    keep up the good work!
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