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Reviews for You Should See Him Naked, I Mean Really

By : sluggie
  • From ANON - spikez angel on May 27, 2005
    hehe this was fab! luvin' the whole dommy-buffy thing n the end was well sweet!

    xxx blessed be xxx

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  • From ANON - Sarah Aless on March 18, 2004
    Absolutely gorgeous ending sluggie:D I'm a big ol'smut monster, I just can't get enough, but I'm kinda glad it was a sweet ending. Now, don't let that put you off doing a sequel - I love fics where they annoy the hell out of each other yet still really love each other (and of course have hot hot hot sex) hell it was what I loved about the couple on the show. Great work thanks for a wonderful story.
    Sarah
    x
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  • From ANON - dstarlit on March 17, 2004
    Great ending for a great story. I think it great that is ended sweetly with them just holding each other talking. Sequel?
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  • From ANON - abk on March 17, 2004
    Decided to brave the end of this one out (I'm a masochist like that... or just curious.) Either way, I'm glad I did. The reconciliation scene "I hurt the girl", "I hurt the boy" was very well done. Kudos, sluggie. Gave me the feeling that they finally understood that they were starting from the same (emotional) place. It was a hard thing you did, and you did it well. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Minnie on March 17, 2004
    I liked it. And I like the ending better without the smut. But a sequel would be cool...
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  • From ANON - Karen on March 17, 2004
    See, rw onw on the archive. Wonderful story!!!! The angst of relatiops aps always gets me. I liked how the "experimentation" with sex between the two and it going sour was perfect. I mean, that stuff happens all the time. You should hear what people stick up their asses... it's hillarious to talk to the ER docs when they get loose mouthed.
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  • From ANON - Kate on March 17, 2004
    Glad you stuck with it and finished the last chapter, despite some of the negative comments. I really liked the whole story (even the 'controversial' chapter) and I'm crossing my fingers for a sequel. It's nice to have characters that behave like real people (and that includes fucking up). Love all your stories- hope you write a lot more!
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  • From ANON - Cheryll on March 16, 2004
    Sluggie;

    I am absolutely enjoying this story. Please do not stop writing. I guess I am one of the few that gets the whole picture. I love the fact that Spike has been repentant during the previous chapters regretting that he has "mucked" things up with Buffy and finally getting the reason why - both the words and bottle incident. I sat and read anticipating what he did that was so bad that Buffy did not want anything more to do with him. The "bottle incident" was an accident no matter how it was spurred on. I did feel that the words Spike used were harsh, but I figure when an individual puts him/herself out there (using the 3 words), and receives no response I guess he/she needs to find a way to save face. I love the fact that you made Buffy more thoughtful in why Spike started to act more of a jerk to her than before -- even if she did nolly lly admit to her friends :), and admit her own insecurities about possibly being in love with Spike. Anya and Cordy could have been more sympathetic, but that would have detracted from the shoot from the hip characters they represented on the show. I am looking forward to the talk and makesesssession in the next chapter. Will it also be the final chapter to the story? Just curious as really don't want story to end. Maybe you could go with a prequel (Spike/Burelarelationship pre-date. Were they class rivals - the types who took up entire class time disagreeing with each other which could lead to fantasies about each other? Did Spike ask Buffy out a lot or just in the coffee house scene in Chapter 1?) or a sequel (Does the Spike/Buffy relationship last? Is there a relationship if so what type boyfriend/girlfriend; engaged, married?)

    KEEP WRITING
    -Cheryll
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  • From ANON - Summer on March 16, 2004
    Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I love this story. The last chapter made me remember something that happened to my best friend and his girlfriend that was along the same lines. Let's just say that they never tried to experiment with those wide candle pillars again. He so so embarrassed because they had to call ems and the EMS guy gave them a lecture about the fact that since they were college students they should of known that the wax on the candle would not lubercate that well. He still hates it when I tease him about candles and foreplay.

    On another note, I hope that you continue to write and finish this story. I love this one and all of your other stories. Each and every day I hit AFF hoping to see one of your stories.
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  • From ANON - C.B. on March 16, 2004
    Holy fuckin' shit, dude! He had a Fatty Arbuckle-like champagne incident, without all the death shi shit. I'd hate his ass too!:) I like the fic, though, so keep it up. He better grovel like a little bitch, though.:)
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  • From ANON - Jenn on March 16, 2004
    hey! I wasn't going to review but then i saw some stuff on your LJ and i just wanted to let you know that i really like this story. I do find it pretty light hearted and funny (although not that bottle part...ouch) and Spike didn't really come across as all evil. Anyways, good job and keep up the good work ( as a side bar: I think that if people do have a problem with this then they really shouldn't be reading NC-17 material at all)
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  • From ANON - sluggie on March 16, 2004
    Oopps..forgot..if a declaration of love so early on in a relationship is insane, then what does that make all the gratuitous sex? I don't know you well enough to love you but I do enough to fuck your brains out and partake in some pretty intimate S&M games which requires quite a level of trust.

    Falling in love with someone had no set time frame. Besides, this was just their first date but they've known each other for months in the story as I pointed out in I think the first or second chapter.
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  • From ANON - sluggie on March 16, 2004
    OK..for the hundrtimetime. I did not imply or otherwise shat hat Buffy was cruel or insensitive or anything else BECAUSE SHE DIDN'T TELL SPIKE SHE LOVED HIM. I implied she was harsh and cruel because of her telling him he was beneath her and would never love him (which she was lying) at the end. Why the hell are two separate scenes being spliced together like that?
    I've written, what I think is much worse than this in my other stories and haven't gotten half the hoopla over it. I keep getting the same complaint that isn't what I wrote either. I don't know what is happening. I've read the chapter at this site and it appears to be the same thing in my word doc. so...shakes head...I don't know why those two scenes are being meshed and then reviewed negatively because that is not what I wrote.

    If you don't like it, don't read it anymore. I don't know what else to tell you.







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  • From ANON - Syl on March 16, 2004
    I usually enjoy your work, but I find the implication that Buffy was cruel or even insensitive by not returning Spike's expren ofn of love to be disturbing. People aren't required to make false declarations of love, and *any* declaration of love so early in a relationship is just insane. And Cordy and Willow upbraiding Buffy for it seems highly out of character.
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  • From ANON - sluggie on March 16, 2004
    abk: That's a good idea. We've already reached the record here for the longeevieeviews ever, I think. ;-) If anyone wants to further this discussion, you can do so at my LJ: http://www.livejournal.com/users/sluggie_/

    Well, at least I can say this. Whether you liked it or not, none of you will ever look at a champagne or wine bottle the same again. 0:-)

    Now...where did I put that cheese grater for my next chapter......





    KIDDING!


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