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By : Roberta
  • From ANON - Margie on March 21, 2004
    Oh my god. I'm crying. Poor William. Ahh! Can't stand it. Make it better, please?
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  • From ANON - gattaca on March 21, 2004
    Well.....I just HAD to say something about this chapter. I'ma be completely honest and tells ya that the beginning of the story was making me kinda nervous cause I was really hoping that Spike wouldn't get to sleep with Buffy first. I was totally rootin for William. And every chapter I was nervous that THAT chapter would be the one where Spike fucked Biffy first. So I kinda put off reading it til later. (Later equals like 5 minutes later. :P ) I just was hopin that William could fuck Buffy first then flaunt it in front of Spike cause Spike was being all cocky and shit. But then I thought about it a lil more and realized that William being assertive and trying to get into Buffy's pants wouldn't have fit his character. The only way William would have gotten to Buffy first is if Buffy came to him. But then, THAT wouldn't have happened cause she was trying to fight her attraction to them the entire story. So then I KNEW that it had to have been Spike to get to her first. I really really really liked the way you did them gettin together too. I don't know if I woulda liked it if Spike's little plan of seduction with her would have worked. I loved how you made her get mad at him and start yelling at him and making him feel like overall shit. It made whenever they got together later seem so much better and I was happy that they did. I loved how you dealt with William too. How he was so upset over Spike and Buffy fuckin' and how he felt so alone now that he thinks that he doesn't have anyone. You've got me really really wanting to read the next chapter. This is probably one of my favorites from you now. You've done an awesome job on the characterization, and just writing the story. It flows so well and you just get me so caught up in it. This had to have been my favorite chapter so far. I think I may make a lil ficart for ya of just that chapter. :) And I STILL needs ta get yo birfday prezzie. It'll get there....once I don't have so much shit due and I can think more on it. :) Today's my own sister's birthday and I couldn't get her anything cause i've been so busy. So ya see....I'ma bit behind on my shit. :P

    I hope the next chapter comes soon!! :D

    Love ya homes! :)
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  • From ANON - Black Dahlia on March 20, 2004
    OMG, that was so fucking hot, but poor William! I hope he gets some Spike or Buffy lovin' soon. *hinthint* Another fantastic installment, pagan ;-)
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  • From ANON - Renee on March 20, 2004
    The reactions of your characters are very realistic, which helps make this fic enjoyable. That and the smut.
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  • From ANON - MArtin on March 20, 2004
    some buffy action finally.... but poor will =(
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  • From ANON - Alicia on March 20, 2004
    Yet another sexy chapter. This is a really naughty wonderful story. Can't wait for you next chapter.
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  • From ANON - lucky021 on March 19, 2004
    Damn, I can't help but always loving the William side of things more, and now that he's been royally screwed, or not as the case may be, I can't help but really feel for him. The poor guy was insecure enough about Spike, but now that both his objects of affection are tied up with each other. poor baby. Man, I seriously love this story, all of your stories in fact, keep up the truly excellent work.
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  • From ANON - lolita on March 19, 2004
    Yay another chapter! hooray!

    It as as usual a brilliant chapter, and brilliantly written too - but poor William, I feel so bad for him, bless his heart - oh I can't wait to see what happens next.

    Lita
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  • From ANON - Sarah Aless on March 19, 2004
    mmm mmm mmmmmmm. Fantastically hot sex on the island LOVED it. Please please let poor William in on the action soon. I feel so bad for him, poor little bugger.
    Sarah
    x
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  • From ANON - sluggie on March 19, 2004
    Awwww..poor widdle William...I just wanna reach out and hug him...among other things...loved Spike's smooth come on moves with the porn movie..lol...another great chapter, PB.
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  • From ANON - Kendall on March 19, 2004
    YEAH!!!!!! THIS CHAPTER IS MY FAVORITE SO FAR!! :D :) Hopefully more and more Buffy/Spike going on. Please keep updating!! :)
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  • From ANON - Emma on March 19, 2004
    Poor William! I feel bad for him, but Spike and Buffy will make it up to him after several chapters of angsty confrontations, right? Please... Well anyway, that was a great chapter, as usual.
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  • From ANON - Lolita on March 19, 2004
    oK, Now I am such a huge fan of your work but I'm afraid I do have a complaint - it's about the whole Spike/William thing.

    WHEN THE HELL IS BUFFY GONNA JOIN THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????????

    Ahem - I love this story, soooo much - just as I love your others soooooo much - I've read everyones comments, and you have got a few negative ones - from one person, and I think that that on pon probais iis into the whole incest thing - you know the whole protesting too much deal! :)

    Yeah I am not really into incest - but when it's indentical Spike goodness, mmmmm. *Drool on keyboard sparks flying*

    Anyway, please update as soon as you can - it's been like a week. Need a fix... ;)

    Lita
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  • From ANON - Cookie on March 18, 2004
    OMG I'm having withdrawl symptoms..... please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 16, 2004
    Please update! I am in the middle of it!!!
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