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Reviews for The Spell Unspoken

By : Tori
  • From Auriam85 on August 07, 2011
    Really Really nice story i love it !
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  • From Ltlconf1 on May 08, 2011
    Howdy,

    I truly hope you do come back to this story (among others) but this one in particular. There seems to be very few Faith/Dawn stories that aren't PWP. This makes this fic a bit unique and thus worthy of renewed life. Besides, first fic or not, you have a good grasp of the characters so nothing to be ashamed of.

    As for Buffy's tude: remind her that she DID sleep with a vamo who'd killed thousands, and Xander is sleeping with a ex-demon who WILLINGLY became one and has killed more than Angelus ever dreamed (and more than most world conquering genocidal maniacs when you throw in the Russian Revolution!) and compared to that (and Spike's constant betrayals concerning Adam) Faith is not only a light weight, but a baby by comparison. 'Sides, to be honest when did the Scoobs ever really welcome her?
    Have Dawn point that out by asking three simple questions: Did you ever ask Faith her last name (Lehane), why did you leave her in a hotel when those places are death traps (vamps could have killed her in her sleep), and how did Faith (a underaged, traumatized (Watcher and mother figure murdered in front of her) runaway) support herself in food, clothing, and shelter hmmm? And watch Buffy do her best landed catfish impression.... Lets not even go into Willow's "Gut her like a fish" cheering practice (apparently NOT killing humans only applies to those we may like) and Xander's "she raped me" act when he likely slept with an underaged girl who's full name he didn't even know (ask yourself that if it was Buffy throwing herself at him, would he had done it?).
    Yeah, there's drama still here!
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  • From ANON - Animism on January 10, 2007
    I am really enjoying this story and look forward to your next update. The characters are great!!!
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