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Reviews for The Adventures of Spike

By : SpIkEsOnEaNdOnLy
  • From RipeWickedPlum00 on February 27, 2004
    I said it before in my review of your other story.

    Learn how to write properly. Seperate your conversations, sentences and paragraphs. Don't use so much slang, it makes it seem like it was written by a 13 year old boy. This is not a very good story.

    Too many technical errors to even get into. I would suggest getting some help from your English teacher or an experienced fanfic writer.

    The best I can say about this story is that at least you sperettretty good.

    I kinow I seem harsh, but I am only being honest. I do this to help you, not to hurt you. I can only assume you are very young, and very inexperienced with godd writing. There is help for you, because we were all bad writers once. But, we got better. Take the time to learn how to write, BEFORE you write.

    Otherwise, this is the only feedback you will get.




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