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Reviews for She's the One for Me

By : QueenB
  • From ANON - Inkling on February 13, 2004
    Chapter 3:
    Why couldn’t Buffy have pulled Willow and Xander aside and told them about the Giles/Buffybot business in private? That really bothered me. I find it difficult to believe that she’d share something so personal and so humiliating to Giles with Anya and Tara, whom she barely even counts as friends at this point, and with Dawn, the little sister she doesn’t even discuss ordinary slaying business in front of. I’ve mostly enjoyed your Buffy characterization up to this point, but that was a big WTF moment for me.

    Your Dawn characterization seems a bit off, too. There’s no way the character, as written at that point in season 5, would get mad at Spike for making cracks about Giles’s age, or go on about what a great guy Giles is, or insult Spike. Don’t get me wrong, I’m not disagreeing with the points being made in that scene, just the choice of Dawn as the mouthpiece for them. I also can’t see her using words like “fiasco”.

    Besides that, I’m enjoying your characterization. Spike is at his snotty, sarcastic, scheming, self-involved best. And Giles's horror at the 'Bot and the guilt over his feelings for Buffy is touching and perfectly believable. (I didn’t really buy him stuttering during the exposition scene, though. He hasn’t stuttered over exposition since, like, Season 2.)

    Sorry for all the nitpicking. This is a pretty compelling fic and I’m eager to see w it’ it’s going.

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  • From ANON - Cin on January 21, 2004
    wya to go Boa! another amazing story. eventually my writing will be that good, but i doubt it. my stories never seem to reach my standards of wow... besides the point that i only have 2 on AFF. lol.

    congratulations on another amazing sotry. Smut Princess is a good title for you.

    i seriously think you should give a thought to writing a B/G AU Lolita style story. w/ you writing it i'm sure it'll be uber hott. :)
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  • From ANON - Cyberwulf on January 20, 2004
    Cool! Trapping the Key undid the monk's spell. No more Dawn! Hurray!
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  • From ANON - Cyberwulf on January 20, 2004
    >>>his plan for tearing apart Useless and Bitchy
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  • From ANON - Cyberwulf on January 20, 2004
    "She missed her gorgeous, musical, agile, strong, cool, smart, funny,
    talented, powerful, popular, sexy, muscular, well-traveled, well-endowed,
    experienced, evil, dangerous, tall, fit, big, bad English vampire with the
    fantastic hair."

    Hee hee hee! Just the kind of narcissistic crap Spike would want the 'bot to spout. I love it!
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  • From ANON - Cyberwulf on January 20, 2004
    Eeee... *squeals in anticipation*
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  • From ANON - Angi on January 20, 2004
    I wished you had made a header as a fair warning or that you had mentioned the pairing beforehand. I absolutely hate the Giles/Buffy-pairing and there was no way I could have anticipated this turn of your story from the way you installed it into the archive.
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