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Reviews for Lust in The Crypt

By : spikeinhell
  • From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2004
    Interesting, but kind of hard to read. You need to separate into
    more paragraphs, and not have two different people speaking in
    the same line, or even the same paragraph. Also, punctuation needs
    punching up.

    Nothing against the story itself, though.
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