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Reviews for TOXIC

By : WickedTemptress
  • From ANON - Kimber on January 13, 2004
    Oh Lordy..

    Buffy, keep your legs together....think of Lily.....think of how you felt when you walked into to find Spike had tripped and his mouth had fallen into a forbidden zone.....you felt what it was like to be cheated on.....would you return the favor to one of you best friends.....especially the more fragile one of your group.......UNLESS....hmmmmm, is Lily up to something.....hmmmmm, makes me think, makes me think....she did only give him a chase kiss goodbye.....oh the possibilities this story has is wonderful.....and has my mind racing and anticipating what is going to happen next in your life.......OH please can we have more......I promise wine, cheese, crackers.....


    Kimber
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  • From ANON - WickedTemptress on January 13, 2004
    Actually after graduating from High School Buffy attended a fashion school which only las for 1-2rs. rs. So she graduated college by the age of 19. Which gave her enough time to acheive success by the age 21.
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  • From ANON - Irissss on January 13, 2004
    Loving the story so far, very sex and the city, just one complaint, I think that I read that Buffy was 21, I think with the way that you introduced the characters and the fact that she is supposed to have this great history that she should be a bit older, at least 25. Quick updates please.
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  • From ANON - spiked on January 12, 2004
    this story shows promise - a hot, forbidden affair... supressed passions... all good stuff. the spelling and grammatical mistakes are very distracting, though. perhaps find an editor to help catch mistakes.
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  • From ANON - starchild on January 12, 2004
    love it! can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Kimber on January 12, 2004
    Okay, want more....wanted it yesterday....not last week......I take it Spike it the cheating slutbunny and is now wanting to cheat on Lily with Buffy......YOU hold your ground girl.......don't let him put in one inch.....make him beg beg beg and beg....before you let him any where near them black panties....and only after he has broken it off with Lily white artsy girl.......okay done with my rant...can't wait for chapter 3....


    Kimber
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  • From ANON - MsSpikester on January 12, 2004
    Very well done~~Am looking forward to more......verrrrry soooonnn!!!!!!!
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