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Reviews for Playing to Win

By : LipbalmAddict
  • From ANON - DittoSpikette on March 21, 2004
    Excellent. Dxxoo
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  • From ANON - whoser_chick on November 24, 2003
    I liked the plot of this story a lot. I liked how Xander was really freaked out about the sexual feelings
    he was having for Spike. Being a Spike/Buffy fan, I really liked the Spike/Buffy aspect here, it was
    well ten.ten. Your characterization was right on. The dialogue was perfect. It was right on for what the
    characters do and say. I felt I was watching a Buffy ep characterization wise. That being said, there were times that I was a little confused as to what was going on, there were parts that could've been written a little clearer.
    And in the last chapter (8) I noticed that the tenses changed back and forth from past to present tense.

    Overall, I think this story is really good, and it kept me interested. Hope to see more from you.

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  • From ANON - Ringwraith on November 16, 2003
    I think you have a valid plot but the story doesn't reallyexplain enough. I mean Buffy was just a little too easy. Why does everyone want Spike.(besides the obvious)
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  • From ANON - nettie on November 14, 2003
    Very smutty...very good...update soon...Please.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 13, 2003
    Spuffy makes me yawn, but you weave the stories nicely.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 11, 2003
    Hey, this is pretty good stuff.

    You're hardly ever awkward or ungrammatical, which is quite remarkable in the realm of fanfiction.

    I'm enjoying it.
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  • From ANON - nettie on November 11, 2003
    great begining...please write more soon...i really like your crafty spike...i'm sure it's going to be fun when he gets his naughty way...update soon!
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  • From ANON - soexasperating on November 11, 2003
    OoooOOoo! I love it! Please write more of your lovely sneaky spike and nervous xander! Sure, okay, this review doesn't make sense but ...the emotion is real! More, please!
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