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Reviews for What comes after

By : Walksoftlytonight
  • From ANON - Karen on February 13, 2005
    This is a good story. Very interesting with a good plot. The spelling mistakes are a bit annoying and some of the conversations between the characters are a little "choppy". The dialog doesn't flow like it should. That said, I think you should continue to write because you do have talent and practice makes perfect they say. I'm looking forward to an update.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on May 26, 2004
    What a wonderful story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Michelle on May 26, 2004
    I really like this so far, and can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - wanda on May 26, 2004
    I have only just found your story I like it very much it makes you want to cry for them .I hope you update soon I am very intersted in how you will resolve all this I thinkyou have a great talent for drama please make the chapters longer , i like your detail
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  • From ANON - Ivette on November 13, 2003
    dude, i'm liking the goes of your story , but i think you need a BetaReader, you have some serious spelling mistakes , i would offer but i kinda suck at spelling too so i wouldn't be a safe bet.
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  • From ANON - NEONEX on November 13, 2003
    Please update as soon as possible. Are you gonna bring Spike back? And if you do, are the Scoobies finally gonna accept him? I hope so. Anyway, keep up the great work.
    NEO
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