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Reviews for Two days till Christmas

By : Azrielle6969
  • From ANON - Dee on October 31, 2003
    So sorry to hear you had to deal with nasty reviews. Great response tem tem though. As for how the rape happened I thought it was believable, Buffy being in a sleeping state and waking up to find out what was happening to her and going into shock (which can immoblize anyone). As for her wanting Spike close, although it is very unusual for a woman to want any man close after a rape, it is not unheard of if the woman trusts the man without question - that unquestioning trust in Spike by Buffy is what I think you are trying to convey in this story and Buffy coming to realize that. I also like how you are portraying Dawn in this story, she knowsethiething is wrong but can't even comprehend how bad it is (because of her youth and innocence), however, is happy that Spike is there for Buffy. Hope I haven't rambled on too much and hope you update soon, the story is very well written and I like how you are delving into the psyches of the characters.
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  • From ANON - Kimber on October 31, 2003
    Hey

    Just keep the story coming.....skip the neggies....they have nothing better to do then bitch about something. FANFICTION, is that.....a work of fiction created by the fan that authors it as she or he sees fit. The readers have the option to read the words in front of them to either enjoy or to say, "This ain't for me" and MOVE ON. If you have negative comments, then voice them nicely, after you make sure you have a right too. If a warning is placed at the beginning of the story and you still read it and become upset, then SHAME on YOU!

    Personally, I read to be entertained, and if everybody stuck to cannon in any fandom, oh what a bunch of boring piece of fiction would we see. Creativity and imagination is what brings these characters to life for us in the fiction this people bust their ass on to write and give out. Creative constructive feedback that helps the author improve their skill is great. Totally negative makes for unhappy le ble because you have attacked them instead of helping them. I will get off my soap box for now.....As for Buffy's slayer strength.....hell she was half asleep and shocked that her normal so called boy it was doing something "souless." before she could fully get her head straight and react, Spike did. I most of the time reserve total judgement on a story when it is finished......

    Also, if I what reality I will pick up some self help or psychology books, that explain oth others think you should react to a certain situtation.......YEAH right, like we all deal with something the same way....or at the time of the assault or trauma.....again, that would make us such predictable and boring people......

    Keep with the story and sometimes the best respoto nto negative feedback is no response.

    Kimber
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on October 31, 2003
    Hey, I can totally understand why you feel the need to explain yourself, but people should realize that this IS FANFICTIION. Has anybody ever heard of a thing called "Artistic license?"

    I think the story is wonderful, and your doing a beautiful job showing the tender side of Spike.
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  • From ANON - irissss on October 31, 2003
    Great story, update soon.
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  • From ANON - shippy on October 31, 2003
    I love all of your stories, please don't take into account all those stupid nasty reviewers. They were on FFnet you said, well that's already an indication isn't it, validating a site that censors fics...
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  • From ANON - Liz on October 31, 2003
    Ok, who the hhad had the stones to flame your story without actually reading it?! Hello! It's clear that Buffy TRUSTS Spike and wants him there because he makes her feel safe. Again, who was the one that threw Riley out before anything worse could happen, SPIKE! So, yeah, I totally understand uffy wanting him there. And for the love of God, people, there was one little kiss. A little "thank you for not being an SOB like Riley." kiss. NO SEX. They did NOT have sex. *rolls eyes* Sodding bunch of gits! Azzy, IGNORE them and keep writing. I got your back.
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  • From ANON - Kelly on October 31, 2003
    I think the story is bloody brilliant, dont listen to those prudes, because sex or no sex that scene with Spike was HOT (yeah you know which one -wink- lol) please keep writting!! I love it.
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  • From ANON - irisss on October 30, 2003
    Wow. more, more, more pplleeaassee. I love sweet spike!!
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  • From ANON - Karen on October 30, 2003
    Awe, how sweet. How does forever sound to you? Sigh! Love it, Damn Riley!!!
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  • From ANON - shell on October 30, 2003
    moleaslease! i like seeing Spike like this!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 30, 2003
    Just wondering where Joyce is in all this, cuz I think Riley was gone before she died. And does Spike's chip not work in this world? Overall it's good, but you could probably benefit from a beta reader for some punctuation and spelling stuff.
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  • From ANON - Millie on October 30, 2003
    I'd love to have some more. May I offer your muse a huge chunk of the devil's food cake with milk chocoalate icing I made last night?
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  • From ANON - Lauren on October 30, 2003
    I really like this....but I want more!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Liz on October 29, 2003
    *tosess your muse a bag of Hershey's Kisses and some Ben and Jerry's* Ok, there, bribed. I want mor thi this story, please! It's so good! I mean come on we all HAVE to see Riley get what's coming to him and I LOVE Spike being so wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 29, 2003
    Not bad. More please.
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