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Reviews for Sweet Sixteen

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  • From ANON - txjmfan on July 14, 2004
    Love the new chapter. Look forward to another update soon.
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  • From ANON - Erin on July 14, 2004
    This is amazing. I love your story. Change the names and the location, and it's me and my first boyfriend with our first experiences. I almost forgot what it was like. I love how you'een een capturing the emotions. The nervousness and the desire to please ar cru crucial in this situation...most stories I've read involved nothing but porn star antics for their first time. But how you write Buffy here makes it easy for one to connect with her. Actually, I think most girls were okay with a boy doing things to them and had a near panic attack when asked to reciprocate! (Aren't we terrible things?) Anyway, enough with my babbling. Just please stay true to the characters you've created and don't have them whip out handcuffs and chocolate sauce. I admit to digging the smut, bu'm s'm seeing this as a coming-of-age thing that is sweet and special. So keep the "corny" lyrics, they fit in well--and they're not corny. I also can't wait to hear William's secret! Update often!
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  • From ANON - Annette on July 14, 2004
    Ooh, ooh so looking forward to the beach after the game!
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  • From ANON - Skyclad8 on May 27, 2004
    I'm really diggin into this story. Always reminds me of my highschool days and the boys. All thos firsts. It's only been 5 yrs but it took reading your story to bring back the fond memories that i hadn't thought of in a long time. Thanks. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Nicky on April 23, 2004
    Wonde as as always.

    I almost didn't read this, i nearly missed it, but i'm so glad that i found it!

    I like that these two are so innocent, discovering things together, whereas in Blue Eyed DevSpikSpike is teaching Buffy.

    Gotta say though, i am loving Acting The Part more than i can say.

    Your fics brighten up my day!

    Nicky
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  • From ANON - txjmfan on April 22, 2004
    Lovin' it so far! Very sweet! More soon please!
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  • From ANON - Burnz on April 21, 2004
    Another good fic. I like the getting to know you phase and the clandestine meetings. I am anxious to see what will happen as they progress in their relationship.
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  • From ANON - Jen on April 21, 2004
    Yay!! You updated! :) Isn't William cute saying he'd carry books for some girl...somewhere, chivalry is not dead! LOL. Great update...keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - Majandrina on April 21, 2004
    I love it. Please keep going.
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  • From ANON - Buffy on April 21, 2004
    I love this story!!! Please update again asap! :)
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  • From ANON - Kar on April 21, 2004
    Great chapter, keep them coming! I love their young love
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  • From ANON - October on April 21, 2004
    Wonderful...

    Now my night is complete and I can go to bed. I knew there was a reason for staying up. :)
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  • From ANON - Kimber on April 21, 2004
    Patty, PattyAnne

    Do you ever sleep.....well if not then I can see where all the creatitve energy is coming from.....you have such an array of stories that you have wondering which update to expect....keep up the wonderful work.....you storytelling is breath taking....(and it's not just the sex either....LOL)

    Kimber
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  • From ANON - Shelby on April 14, 2004
    Hey, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ((etc.)) update!!! It's killing me that you haven't in such a long time! (I know you have a lot of other stories out there but please, UPDATE!!!!!) Okay, anyway, your story is fantastic (I don't beg for nothing) :)
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  • From ANON - Shelby on March 25, 2004
    Hey, UPDATE!!! Your killing me because your not updating, the story is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!
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