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Reviews for Goodbye William

By : Azrielle6969
  • From ANON - bansheeh on September 05, 2003
    Hii i like this story i really do ..ive been looking forward to each chapter.
    I just wanted to say 1 little thing.
    The chapters up to the last one have all been fairly well written it just semed like
    the last chapter had been written a little to fast maybe and i just think it could have been maybe longer
    or cut to 2 parts and maybe with just a little more thought to it.

    dont think i dont like you or ure fiction cose i do.
    I just wanted to pinpoint that if you put more thought and maybe added more to the last chapter
    it would give more back to us readers and ureself as a writer.
    Afterall thats why we have the feedback, to learn how be better writers
    untill we are pros like Kantayra and Jypzrose and Kallysten.

    all my best
    ||basheeh||

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  • From ANON - Hannah on September 04, 2003
    I'm still lovin this story!!! Please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - dusty273 on September 04, 2003
    they got back together finally! that makes me very happy, more please.
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  • From ANON - Uncouth Kitten on September 04, 2003
    Love it!! More soon, please.
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  • From ANON - dusty273 on September 03, 2003
    more... pretty please ;) i'm so loving this
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 03, 2003
    Very nice! Spike making Buffy jealouERY ERY jealous. Jasmine seems like she really wants to help, I hope she is for real.
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  • From ANON - bec on September 03, 2003
    Ok...now I know I must have read too many if these sort of things, 'cos I totally think Jasmine is evil and trying to do something else with Spike & buffy. You promise smutty...will it be spuffy smutty or spasmine? 'Cos I only want the spuffyness. Enjoying it so far. Gotta love a jealous Buffy fighting for her man.
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  • From ANON - Liz on September 03, 2003
    PLEASE keep going! I am really enjoying this! You've really got me hooked!!
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  • From ANON - Tara on September 03, 2003
    Ok the whole jealousy thing has been done and it usually backfires and the whole situation gets worse from there but I migike ike this story if Buffy and Spike are going to be together. Oh by the way Dawn getting slapped was great. If the little bitch talked to me like that I sure as hell would have smacked her.
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  • From ANON - dusty273 on September 02, 2003
    please continue, loving this idea :)
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