Reviews for On The Balcony

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  • From AFFModerator on June 18, 2018

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  • From ANnon82 on June 06, 2018

    I have to agree with Oric13, the balcony scene from Dead Things is a great starting point for erotic Buffy fanfiction that gets used very rarely, with it and the handcuff scene there is plenty of room for alternate smutty takes on the later part of Season 6.

    In reading your take on the scene I like the part about another cuple also engaged in a public sex act sees what Buffy and Spike are doing on the balcony.

    I will note however that due to Buffy being shorter than Spike and the fact that she is not bent over much it has often been belived that Spike was buggering Buffy, that is having anal sex with her, on the balcony in Dead Things.



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  • From pippychick on June 02, 2018

    Please correct your disclaimer.

    Your disclaimer doesn't have all the parts we need to see. It can be worded however you like, as long as you include the name of the specific fandom (and not just the characters) and clearly say that you make no money/profit.

    You must use the actual name of the fandom. Just naming the owners/creators of the fandom, or saying that you don't own only the characters is not enough. It's also not enough to say that this is just for fun or entertainment. You have to clearly say that you make no money/profit.

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  • From Oric13 on June 01, 2018

    Good job. I'm surprised that not more adult fanction writers have used this scene as a starting point for some good smut considering it is one of the most erotic scenes from BtVS.



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