Reviews for The Servitude of Sappho: Remaking of Joyce Summers

BY : Salamandaslash


  • From Krulos on September 04, 2017

    I personally find I rather like the touch of Tara as a secretly bad girl- just referring to her language, and also Kennedy as Tara's lover; that pairing is oodles of fun, however, you are perfectly free to disagree with any of the points I'm making in this statement, Miss.

    Don't you worry, I'm not running you down at all for this, but I have to admit that I *am* opposed to their word choice and *behavior*, that being about it. One typically does not choose one's desires, so don't worry about that, but *actions* *are* chosen by the individual.

    I haven't any complaints with them trying to comfort her, however, and the way you seem to have Faith winding up as Joyce' wife, and therefore the stepmom of the Summers' sisters is a most entertaining touch, but really only because of the inherrant drama that'd result than any such relationship- which *would* create drama, believe me!

    Sincerely hopeful for more, and don't you worry, you *can* make a long story out of a whole bunch of short chapters- and it'd still be a long story; and somewhat easier to manage to read, actually... but how you write is up to you, Miss, and really only you; so don't think I'm yelling at you, I'm not. Just some pointers you might find useful.

    I love the inserted reflections in your work, that's a brilliant touch!

    Sincerely one of your hopefully many fans;

    Krulos.



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  • From justheretoread on August 28, 2017

    I just wanted to say I am really loving this fic. I read some of the inspiration for these fics a while ago and always loved them and well I am on a website with smutty Buffy fanfic so yea this is totally my thing. I hope you keep going, although I admit to loving the side stories a bit more than the main one (Willow being dommed by both Tara and Kennedy is fucking hot) 



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