Reviews for Confronting a Friend

BY : Krulos

  • From ANON - Douglas on February 16, 2015

    Sorry, But you have to fix alot of the dialogue's spacing, as its all crammed into each other. You also had several spelling errors, so this hurt a bit to try to read, and therefore I only glanced through the bottom half. Faith - Ken: related, its been tried before, but of the two other times I remember neither was finished. Hell, of those 2, one was on a GEO-cities site that folded Before the Implosion, so its been gone for 6 or 7 years now.
    This has promise, but it needs tweaking very much. Good Luck.

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