Reviews for Xander & Dawn: To Feel Alive

BY : DevilDuck

  • From Magnusxxz on August 13, 2017

    Just noticed there is in fact no Xander/Faith sex in this story. How is that possible? Lets have the happen soon? Or at least give Faith a strap on to use on Dawn. Ohh, a Xander/Dawn/Faith sandwich.



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  • From Magnusxxz on May 17, 2017

    ...Not sure how I feel about the rape scene of Faith.



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  • From Magnusxxz on September 27, 2016

    Not as fun as earlier chapters. Where are you going with this? Hope to read more soon, see what happens next. Keep up the good work.



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  • From ANON - Albino87 on May 29, 2015

    Great story

    One of the few stories that have Dawn/Xander paring.

    Wondering how long until Xander take command in the relationship and teach Dawn a lesson.

    Keep the chapter coming

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  • From ANON - LouiseFairfax73 on April 16, 2015

    I seems to me that Buffy is just jealous that Dawn got to Xander before she did. I also think that Buffy is just acting out of spite that someone who isn't her is being happy with someone else.

    Also, I can't wait for the Faith/Vi/Dawn/Xander grouping (then maybe just Dawn/Faith).

    But that's just me.

    Keep up the good work ;)

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  • From ANON - Anon on April 12, 2015

    I would think Xander would get extremely mad at Buffy for continually accusing him of Parker level behavior and being a complete hypocrite considering she's slept with mass murderers that were centuries old. I'd love to see Xander, maybe Willow, completely lay into her for the way she's treating Xander

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  • From ANON - Anon on April 10, 2015

    More please, and keep it coming.

    Also I wouldn't mind a Buffy/Xander/Dawn chapter, Bander is my favorite ship after all.

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  • From Oric13 on April 09, 2015

    Chapter 4: Heh. Looks like our sweet lil Dawnie is somewhat of an exhibitionist. Really liked the ending.

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  • From Oric13 on March 20, 2015

    Chapter 3: That was quite a hot lil threesome. Good job upping the smut factor of this story.

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  • From ANON - dest on March 06, 2015

    I am enjoying this. Was a bit surprised about them being found so fast. Your intro to chapter 2 made me think it would go on longer. Hopefully see chapter 3 soon.

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  • From ANON - Anon on March 01, 2015

    Another chapter please

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  • From Oric13 on February 27, 2015

    The sex scenes could be a bit more extensive and detailed but otherwise a fun and well-written story.

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