Reviews for Potential Poker


  • From saladie on July 06, 2014

    LOL, a spanking curse on Buffy's butt, now that's an idea you don't see often, if ever.

    I like this story very much. Including the potentials was truly fun. Normally, I'm not a big fan of them but you make it work wonderfully. If I had to guess, I'd say 'Dawn has been kidnapped' is the origin story of this. I don't think the characters, especially Buffy, are portrayed unrealistically. From your premise it's clear that there's much information missing, so we don't know what happened to them to make them act that way. But again, your author's notes clearly say so...

    Thanks for sharing this fun and kinky story.

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  • From IMTCWAY on July 05, 2014

    Yes, there's no denying this Buffy is quite a bit different from canon. If the story had gone the way I wanted there would have been at least 25 chapters describing why she is like she is before we got here. I think it would then have been quite a bit more believable.

    Thing is, the curse I mentioned, it was real. I expect having a curse on your bottom does a lot to change a girl's attitude to life. I don't think there was a single female inhabitant of Sunnydale (except perhaps Willow's mum...) that hadn't warmed ms. Summers' ass by this point - and Giles.

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  • From Oric13 on July 04, 2014

    You've written Buffy as an unrealistically big wuss, but still a fun and kinky story.
    It certainly has a lot of potential.

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