Reviews for The Bloody Savior

BY : GreenRogue


  • From AFFModerator on July 27, 2013

    Please correct your disclaimer.


    Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. It must say that no money/profit is made. Saying that itís just for fun or just for entertainment purposes is not enough.


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  • From Mickelus on July 23, 2013

    Good story, well written. The only problem I have with it is how Willow is acting around Angel and Spike...totally out of character for her. And I feel that Angel's a bit out of character too, though if you're writing him as though Angelus has more influence over his action than in canon I guess that's acceptable. if this becomes Willow/Angel...I just don't see that relationship as plausible. Willow/Spike is pretty much the same, though they had better on screen chemistry. And if it ends up being Willow/Spike/Angel...that's just extremely AU in my opinion. I'm not saying I don't like the story, it's just they all seem a bit out of character.

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