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Reviews for Dawn's Wish

By : MTL
  • From HunterOpera on November 25, 2012
    Absolutely love this story. The psychology of the Summers sisters is incredible, with Dawn being horrible, selfish, and knowing exactly what buttons to press as she becomes more confident in her own power while Buffy tries - and fails - to hold onto her sense of self. This is very true to the later seasons of the show in terms of tone and dialogue while still being perverse in the best possible ways.

    I can hardly wait to see what you've got in mind for the chapters to come.
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  • From ANON - Forgotten_Conscience on November 18, 2012
    Great story so far, are you going to be finishing it at some point?
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  • From ANON - w1p on June 04, 2012
    good story, please continue
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  • From Oric13 on June 02, 2012
    Chapter 4: Good chapter. Finally something else than extreme butt-fucking.
    Dawnie getting off on sexually humiliating her bossy big sis was a lot of fun to read.
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  • From breachoftruscott on March 12, 2012
    hot damn! the Dawn-imatrix strikes again!!! who, oh who will poor Buffy run into while patrolling? Faith? Spike? Angel? Willow? (one never knows...;)) Drusilla, maybe? deeeee-lish! more more MORE!!!!
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  • From Oric13 on March 08, 2012
    Part 2: Enjoyed this 2nd part, although not quite as much as I initially thought I would, especially considering I'd really been looking forward to more of this kinky tale.
    So I spend some time wondering what the problem was, and decided that I was probably looking forward to more Dawn/Buffy kinkiness.
    Still, a Dawn/Faith pairing is also very hot, and sweet lil Dawnie fist-fucking the dark slayer's tight ass was pretty fucking hot and not something you read every day.
    So why is my grade for the part a B- instead of a straight A, which I felt the first part deserved.
    Digging a little deeper, I think the problem is that you wasted very little time in turning Faith into an ultra submissive anal slut who'll even happily fist her own ass; story-wise there's really not many places you can take the Dawn/Faith pairing after that.
    I mean, sure, there'll undoubtedly be several other oversized toys that Dawnie will shove up her bitch's bunghole, and the setting might even more public than the kitchen of the Summers' house, but it'll still seem a bit repetitive after all this anal play that already took place between them. Faith has obviously already fully surrendered to her young Mistress, so the tension there is pretty much gone.

    So I'm kinda hoping that when Dawnie eventually fucks her big sister's butt, it'll have taken her a lot more time & effort than Faith.
    The harder the fight the sweeter the victory...

    Oh, and two more things.
    One: it's bare ass, not bear ass. At least I didn't think you wanted to write that Faith has the ass of a bear ;)
    Two: "Harder! Fist that slutty ass of yours as hard as you can bitch! Tear your own fucking ass hole apart! - considering the "EVERYTHING Dawn says must be obeyed" spell she's under, and Faith's super slayer strength, Dawn probably should have rephrased that slightly.

    Finally, please don't let these minor criticism disparage you, because that's definitely not how they're intended.
    I DID enjoy this part--it was a very enjoyable read--and I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From exgi92dm on March 01, 2012
    Really good story you've got going so far. Trying to be patientent waiting for the next chapter. Also, are you still writing "Buffy's Blackmailing Little Sister". Hope to be reading new chapters from both stories soon (real soon). Thank's for taking the time to write for us readers.
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  • From breachoftruscott on February 12, 2012
    so hot...so many delicious possibilities...yummy yummy yum more PLEASE!!!!
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  • From PanzerDoo on February 07, 2012
    Great beginning. More soon I hope.
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  • From ANON - slurrrp on January 14, 2012
    Great story. Looking forward to Dawn training both slayers. It would be fun to watch them compete in humiliating challenges for the honor of having Dawn fuck their asses.
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  • From Ginvirus on January 10, 2012
    Hi ,
    just want to say i like your story.
    How you write Buffy and Dawn.
    Faith is good to just a bit easy.
    But that is ok because Dawn got to her ass that much faster.

    I would like to see someone lick Dawns feet(Buffy)and a magic cock.
    I would be really happy if you considered this.

    Happy Writing


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  • From ninesenshi on January 10, 2012
    Good stuff. Hope to see more. Would be cool if Dawn got a magical, living cock to impregnate Buffy with...
    SailorNemesis
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  • From saladied on January 09, 2012
    Wonderful start for this very hot story! Interesting and refreshing premise with the wish, lots of degrading possibilities for poor Buffy. I absolutely love Dawn humiliating her big slayer sister, please more of that. Also, interesting interaction between Dawn and Faith, with the wish just being the catalyst to bring their new sub-dom relationship about, giving Dawn the confidence to act on her feelings and desires.
    Hope you'll continue this soon.
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  • From Oric13 on January 09, 2012
    Love the premise of this story and you're of to an excellent start.
    Curious to see what depraved Dawnie Summers will be up to next.
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