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Reviews for Buffy's Blackmailing Little Sister

By : MTL
  • From ANON - Anon on April 30, 2010

    Loved the new chapter (3)! I really enjoyed reading it. It's fun to see how you make the unconventional situation of a dominant Dawn and a sub Buffy work. Great to know you're writing again!

    Please try to stick to the more psychological aspects of this story and don't start focusing too much on the sex itself. It's fun, of course, and well written, but in my opinion it should be a tool for or a consequence of the plot, not the main plot itself.

    Again, well done!
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  • From topcat098 on April 19, 2010
    Wow, I like part 3 a lot. Very hot. My only worry is you've not left much novelty for the next part. Dawn's done so much to her sister already that there's not all that much left. I hope the mention of a picnic suggests outdoor fun. Perhaps Buffy will be made to display herself in front of strangers - that sounds good. Perhaps she can be bent over a fallen tree and given another good spanking - she certainly deserves it.
    There was a long break between parts 2 and 3, I hope you can concentrate hard a bring out the next part a little sooner.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2009

    Nice update, well done! I like how you're taking your time with this story, not rushing the "action", instead describing what's happening on an emotional level. I look forward to reading more of this story!
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  • From Oric13 on December 09, 2009
    Good story.
    I'm eagerly awaiting the part where Dawnie is going to take her big sister's anal cherry.
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  • From on November 20, 2009
    good story i wonder what cool stuff dawn his in stole for buffy...
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 20, 2009
    Well now, how about that? A completely new Buffy/Dawn story! I love every single part of chapter 1! I don't know what it is, but writing Buffyverse stories seems to bring out your best. It's emotionally well written, you do a very good job of portraying Buffy as close to her character as possible in this specific scenario of yours. The first chapter was driven by emotions and plot development, which is something I really like.

    I look forward to reading more of this story - am I right in assuming that the story will have seven chapters?

    Well done!
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  • From topcat098 on November 20, 2009
    Sorry derlich, got to disagree. This is much hotter. I can't wait for part 2.
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  • From derlich on November 20, 2009
    I like Disciplining Dawn WAY more. You should keep up with that one.
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