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  • From animism on August 02, 2008
    Another fabulous chapter. I am really enjoying this story!!!
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  • From Alonlyvoice on August 02, 2008
    well that was something! Demone fighting with Slayers, Skye. its all just great! keep it up please!!!
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  • From animism on August 02, 2008
    very hot!!
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  • From animism on August 01, 2008
    These last 2 chapters were too funny, I can't wait for more.
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  • From Alonlyvoice on August 01, 2008
    oh thatas just to funny! thata a nice way to spice it. i whant to know whats up with the fainting, but i might know, But just in case im wrong, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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  • From Bumkins87 on August 01, 2008
    Wouldn't it make sense to have the Protector be Ryan? That whole thing with her blood being deadly and all. Who else could it be? ::shurgs:: I just always thought Ryan was the protector.

    If it were the slayers it would be the chosen. It can't be Skye, she is protected. Raya, I suppose could be the protector. But she has already vanished once in this story while protecting her loved ones.

    Besides, this story has been more about Skye and Ryan. She has protected Remy for years, even when she has been sick. Definitly Ryan. Just don't kill her or Skye, I'd like Ryan to be happy for a little while. Even if there is no cure for her disease (which I think Willow could totally get out of her..hint hint, nudge nudge), she should be able to live out the last of her days with her mate in total bliss. Plus more sex. Lots more. Maybe even with some toys.

    MORE MORE MORE!!!

    ~Jen~
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  • From wilcat75 on August 01, 2008
    hey
    really like this story like how everything is jelling together

    you said that you where hveing trouble thinking of who should be the protector hear are my suggestions either lonnie or david

    lonnie cos it would help her to feel more needed and like she fits in
    david because hes the quiet one that no one seems to really no and could be keeping a secret

    the only other thought that i had was if skye and ryan had a kid
    bcos there blood mates and ryan is a hybrid and if she and skye had a kid it would be another hybrid but maybe cos its such a crossbreed it could change into any animal it wants and has a lot of power it doesnt have to be born yet ryan could be pregnant with it and kind of leach the power of it and it will also cure her


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  • From Alonlyvoice on July 31, 2008
    great great GREAT job!
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  • From willowfan on July 31, 2008
    More great updates!
    Glad Asher is getting better-
    the Bad Man is so gonna get his ass kicked
    when Buffy or Lonnie or Raya or Willow gets
    a hold of him! Can't wait. Liked the playfulness
    with Ryan and Skye hope things turn out okay for
    them. More updatey goodness soon please:)
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  • From Alonlyvoice on July 31, 2008
    i like the singing thats just mean and funny to no end, i like it!
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  • From animism on July 31, 2008
    These last chapters are intense and it is neat to see Jaeger's character coming to life. You have combined all of the different storylines beautifully and now have this huge, wonderful novel going. I love all of your speedy updates. Thanks
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  • From animism on July 31, 2008
    you have done it once again. Thanks for a fabulous read!!!!!
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  • From Alonlyvoice on July 31, 2008
    most fantastic update!
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  • From guy on July 30, 2008
    Love the new updates. Please give us more soon.
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  • From Alonlyvoice on July 30, 2008
    what is it with you and almost killing off charaters? it makes for good drama but you can only do so much before it gets old. its a great story really, i like it alote.
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