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Reviews for Crash and Burn

By : MistressTitania
  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on June 03, 2005
    It's an interesting idea, but you either need to proofread your work or get a beta. There are way to many grammatical mistakes in this story to make it a pleasurable read. It's hard to enjoy a story when I have to spend half my time trying to figure out what you're trying to say. I know everyone else is yelling, "more, more, more," but I'm saying, "proofread, proofread, proofread." You'd be amazed how much better your stories are if you take a little extra time to clean them up.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 03, 2005
    love this story anya must die!!!!! update soon very soon in other words NOW!!!!!
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  • From ANON - AmaRae on June 03, 2005
    Ooooooooohhh!!!!! Naughty Anya! ::shakes finger at annoying ex-vengence demon b*tch:: How DARE you be mean to my precious Xanny-poo?! I think I'll lock you in a room full of little grey and white flesh-eating zombie bunnies. ::crosses arms and scowls mightily::

    That said, please continue with this fic, as it seems like a very good story base line. I can totaly see Anya as an abusive partner and poor submissive Xander taking her abuse.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 03, 2005
    next chapter please
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  • From ANON - cathy on June 03, 2005
    Ooohh. Yeah. This does seem very interesting. Please write more! And soon, please. You've made a very valid point about Anya. She was a man hating demon for a very long time. Yet that was forgotten in canon. This story has a premise that I've never seen before. Yay! A new slant!

    Thank you for writing the teaser. Now, please write the rest of it!

    Cathy
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  • From ANON - RemityGirl on June 03, 2005
    YES, PLEASE!! WRITE MORE AND SOON!! AND IF SPIKE HAS T KILL ANYA....OH WELL. LOL
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  • From ANON - Yukiko_xAkuma on June 03, 2005
    More More More PLEASE write more Please Please thank you
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  • From ANON - Fan Girly on June 03, 2005
    That is just mean please put the rest up as soon as you can!!!!
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