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By : VampireLover
  • From ANON - white rabbit on February 05, 2004
    OK i'm interested, in fact very interested...give me more
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  • From ANON - C on February 01, 2004
    You seem to have a very interesting story idea and I am really interested to see where you are going with it. I will really be excited if you don't take what seems to be the easy out that alot of ff writers take of just dismissing Riley as unimportant or abusing the character because that's not who Buffy oends up with. But... please please please get a beta reader or an editor. You have serious problems with tense and some sith syntax which take away from the story. However, your imagery is really good and your dialogue is as well from what I've read so far. Good Luck.
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  • From ANON - Phayra on February 01, 2004
    Interesting. I hope you continue.
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  • From ANON - vicann on February 01, 2004
    I will be interested to see where you take this. You have the basis for a great story.

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